Hey guys, this post is dedicated to my second elevator pitch. It is safe to say that a had a little bit of fun with this one and tried to include a nice hook to draw in the viewers attention. The biggest thing people told me during my last pitch was to immediately grab the attention of my viewers so hopefully my new approach will accomplish that exact thing. Other than that the feedback was extremely positive so I hope that I outdid the last one. Enjoy guys!
Link to elevator pitch No.2: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xlzRfHVbLmY
Let me know what you all think, thanks in advance for all your feedback.
Until next time,
-Bryce
I think that your pitch was really clever! I thought at first that you actually were waiting at the book store all day and had but this assignment on the back burner! Needless to say your intro did draw me in! The only complaint I would have is that you did talk kind of fast, but overall great job! If you would like to check out my pitch feel free! http://dillondunn.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2-dillon-dunn.html
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your idea~ your pitch was fun and engaging and I certainly felt as though my grabbed my attention! I was engaged and thought it was really interactive! Check out my post if you have time: http://kristianasimon.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2-week-7.html
Hey Bryce! I really liked watching your elevator pitch and I think you did a great job with the hook. I think your pitch was the perfect amount of time, just long enough to get all of the information across that everyone needed to know, but short enough to keep me interested. Great job!
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